英作文の添削をお願いします！！！！

himamatoさん

英作文の添削をお願いします！！！！

I’m from Yamanashi city. It is same Yamanashi Prefecture as Tsuru City
Yamanashi Prefecture is mainly famous for fruit. In particular, grapes and peaches are famous and visiting many tourists. And the wine using the grape of Yamanashi made our prefecture. It is too famous, and taste is very good. Moreover, speaking of Yamanashi, Mt. Fuji is also famous. Many tourists are coming from each country. They are climbing a Mt. Fuji.

It is same Yamanashi Prefecture, but. I think that it is the difference in climate to compare and consider Tsuru city and Yamanashi. Although I pass to the university by train, I am troubled by deciding the clothes each time. Even if warmer in Yamanashi city, but when the time comes to Tsuru city, there are fairly cold many things. When the time of winter season, when I left home not snowing but from the tunnel there is snow over everything. These cases are also things very repeatedly. Although the talk of Mt. Fuji appeared in others first, that it is cannot be seen from Tsuru city. I can see from Yamanashi city it is. I was a little surprised when I knew that Mt. Fuji cannot be seen for the first time also in the same Yamanashi. Moreover, I think Tsuru city is the country than Yamanashi city. Although my hometown is also the country, when it passed to Tsuru city, it was thought that there were many retro stores. Yamanashi city is not seen these retro stores, so it was interesting and I went to such a store with my friend, it was very fresh. And, Turu city is surrounded by green nature. My hometown is fresh air too. But Turu city more than fresh air.