英検のライティングの添削をお願いします。 Do you think parents should let their children play video games?
採点・99/100点 feel stress ---> feel stressed Do you think parents should let their children play video games? I think parents should let their children play video games for the following two reasons. First, it can help children make friends. In the current situation regarding COVID-19, ＝Under such situation that COVID-19 menaces us, playing video games while talking with their friends on the phone might be one of the best ways to strengthen their friendship. =to tighten their friendship. Second, being unable to do what they want =being confined at home could make children feel much stress. =could make children feel much stressed. As the proverb goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy".