英検準一のライティングの添削していただきたいです。 前回の英検でライティングの点数が低かったのですが、何が原因でしょうか。内容はともかく構成が2点だったのですが、書き方が間違っていますか？ 英語に詳しい方よろしくお願い致します。 Topic:Do you think children should have homework during summer vacation? Points:Children's happiness Teacher's workload I do not think that children should have homework during summer vacation .I have two reasons to support my opinion. First of all, children want to do not only their homework but also what they like.For example,researching project for a long time,reading a lot of booksand so on.Also some children want to study abroad during summer vacation.Without their homework,they can go abroad easily. Second of all ,teachers are very hard after summer vacation. I heard two semester is the busiest season in the year because teachers need to check students' assignments.And the more students,teachers'burden is large. According to the reasons stated above, giving children summer vacation is a not good thing.