英検準1級のwritingの添削をお願いします。 （設問） Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure : introduction, main body, and conclusion. ・Do you think that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days ? ・Points→Costs, Internet, Carer, Foreign products. （答案） I do not think about the fact that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days for the following reasons. First of all, most of the Japanese students are using Internet by using a smart phone. Therefore, more and more Japanese students are able to catch much foreign information more easily than before and are having positive attitudes toward other countries. The second reason is that more and more Japanese students are thinking that working in foreign countries broaden their minds, because in other countries, they can interact with a lot of people who have different cultures or ways of thinking. Thus, they can choose various options in their career. In conclusion, for all the reasons I mentioned above, more and more Japanese students are interested in other countries.