英検準1級ライティングの添削お願いします。 Topic Is it beneficial for workers to change jobsoften? 選んだpoints Motivation, Working conditions I think that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often. There are two reasons for this. First, it is difficult for people to keep their motivation for work. Also what people want to do is changing constantly. In my opinion they sometimes need to challenge new things, and it will have a good influence on them. Second, most workers may think that they want to work in the best place for them. Working conditions are very important for their jobs.If they work too hard to take a rest, they will not do their best. In addition, there are many choices at career. The best thing is that people choose the job which is the fittest for them, For these reasons, I agree with the idea that workers change jobs for themselves.