英検準一級 ライティング topic 「日本は完全なキャッシュレス社会になるべきか」 どなたか心優しい方、アドバイスや軽くでいいので添削などしていただけるとありがたいです。 These days, there are more cashless stores than before in Japan. And I think that Japan should become a completely cashless society. I have two reasons for this . First of all, the number of crime ,like theft of wallets would decrease because we will not have to bring our cash ,if we can buy things by our smartphone. In addition thiefs who threaten the stuffs would vanish because there are no money at any shops . To begin with , that affects to the Japanese economy . The reason why I think that is that people can purchase foods or essential goods more comfortably. Then this situation would boost the output of the companies or shops. For these reasons, cashless society would make Japan more safety and richer. 長い文を読んでいただきありがとうございました 些細なアドバイスなどでもありがたいです！
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