中1です。英語の授業でスピーチがあるので音楽について話そうと思うのですが、下の文でなにかおかしいところはありますか？ Hello, I'm (名前). Do you like music? I like music, especially JPOP and KPOP. My hobbies are guitar and bass, so I also like playing songs on them. I listen to music when I want to concentrate, such as when studying. Listening to music helps you concentrate, and listening to upbeat songs also makes you feel happy. Therefore, music brings color to our lives. Let's all listen to a lot of music. Thank you for listening.