英検準一級の添削お願いします(^^)/ ●Write an essay on the given TOPIC. ●Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. ●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion ●Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Should Japan do more to protect its historic sites? POINTS ●Cost ●Development ●Education ●Tourism I think Japan should do more to protect its historic sites. I have two reasons to support my opinion. To begin with, protecting Japanese historic sites can attract a lot of domestic and international tourists. I think they will use the money to learn Japanese history. Furthermore, the tourism industry is one of the methods that make money. In addition, protecting Japanese historic sites can lead to education for children. Children can get information about Japanese history when they visit historic sites. I think that Children will become more interested in Japanese history by visiting historic sites where they can actually feel the history. Through this experience, children get more extensive their wisdom or horizon. For these reasons, I think it is a good idea for Japan should do more to protect its historic sites.
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