高校の授業でドイツについて紹介するスピーチの原稿を書きました。納得いく作文が出来ず２案書いたのですがどちらが良いかアドバイスください。 ①Germany is a country in Central Europe with a temperate climate. It has four seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. The average temperature ranges from 2℃ in January to 18℃ in July. Germany has a rich and diverse culture that reflects its history and geography. It is known for its music, literature, philosophy, art, and science. Some of the famous German figures are Bach, Beethoven, Goethe, Kant, Einstein, and Merkel. Germany also has a varied and tasty cuisine that is influenced by its regions and neighbors. Some of the typical German dishes are sausages, bread, cheese, beer, and wine. Some of the regional specialties are currywurst, schnitzel, spätzle, and stollen. ②Germany is known for its unique Christmas traditions. The country celebrates Christmas with two public holidays, on December 25th and 26th. On Christmas Eve, which is divided into a hectic morning and a festive evening, shops are open until noon and people buy their last presents or food for the festive meal. The traditional Christmas meal is roast goose with potato dumplings and red cabbage. Germans also enjoy baking Christmas biscuits, buying presents, and decorating the Christmas tree with fairy lights and colorful baubles. The period from St. Martin’s Day on November 11th until December 24th is a time of fasting, and that is why a simple dish is served, such as carp or potato salad with sausages. Roughly one in four Germans go to church at Christmas, and attending the Christmas service at midnight on Christmas Eve is a ritual that many would not like to miss． よろしくお願いいたします。
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