苦手どころか、大変よくできています。将来が楽しみです。これから飛躍するためには、英語辞書に親しんで、Japanese English でない、本物の英語を身につけましょう。 「The Britannica Dictionary」例文が豊富 https://www.britannica.com/dictionary/take https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/week 「he Longman Dictionary」熟語、文法説明が豊富 https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/constitute https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/participate https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/especially いずれも学習者向けで、比較的易しい英語で書かれていて、利用しやすいです。 I agree (X that Japan should accept more people from other countries to work in Japan→ with the opinion. The resons are as follows). こんなこと、長々と付け加えることありますか。文字数稼ぎとみなされますよ。 First, Japanese society is (X aging→ an aging) society. Workers are decreasing. For example, the shortage of taxi drivers is a serious problem. If this problem isn't solved, it's hard for elderly people to go out. → To accept more workers from foreign coutries may help this problem' s solution. Second, we can get the chance to (X know→ be familiar with) various cultures. Learning about foreign countries is good for (X business→ ｍutual understanding). Therefore, I think (X accepting→ to aqccept) more foreigners to work is very good idea. 英作文チェック事項 作文が終わったら、まず、SVOC がしっかりしているか、誤字、冠詞、単複、可算・不可算、三単現のｓ、自動詞・他動詞、時制の一致、などを「必ず」チェックしましょう。 Whichi is correct?:Japan ia an aging society. and Japan is aging society. ChatGPT The correct sentence is: "Japan is an aging society." This sentence indicates that Japan has a growing elderly population. The second sentence, "Japan is aging society," is grammatically incorrect because it lacks the article "an" before "aging society."