英検2級の英作文の採点・添削をお願いします。 TOPIC Some people say that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better. Do you agree with this opinion? I think that it is necessary for people to go to important historical sites in order to understand history better for the following two reasons. Firstly, it is important for us to understand history. Learning history contributes to improving a technology, and as a result our life becomes more confortable. Secondly, experience is one of the critical factors. Going to historical sites makes us smart because we can undergo life at that time. For these reasons mentioned above,I believe that people should visit historical sites. よろしければアドバイスもお願いします。