英検２級のライティングです。 間違っているところや直した方がいいところを教えてください。 問題 Some people say that people today should spend less time using the Internet. Do you agree with this opinion? I agree with the opinion that people today should spend less time using the Internet. I have two reasons for it. To begin with, communication is very important. For example,they can talk with their friend an hour by decreasing time using their computer. It will make them happy.Next, education is very important, too. If they use the Internet too much, they could not study enough. By doing so, they will not be able to finish their homework. In conclusion, I think it is good for people to decrease time using the Internet.