英検2級のライティングです。 添削していただけたら幸いです。 I agree with the idea that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. I am alos interested in it. Here are two reasons to support my view. Firstly,pets makes me happy. For example,when people are tired backing thier home,pets comes to me. Secondly,people can expend them network. For instance,when they walk with thier pets,they can talk people who have the pets. Because of all the reasons above,I think more apartment buildings should allow pets.