どなたか添削お願いします。慶応経済の2016年の自由英作文です。 課題文 Should the Japanese government require everyone to vote? I think the Japanese government should not require everyone to vote for the following two reasons. Firstly, everyone has the right not to vote by the basic human right. According to Fran Chizeforall ( 2014 paragraph 7), one is still free to post a blank ballot, and thus to express no opinion. I agree with the statement to some extent, but we can also express no opinion by not voting. Therefore, we needn't make people vote to express no opinion. Secondly, there is a possibility that the people not interested in politics vote with no thought. I think the people interested in politics have already voted before a government requires everyone to vote That is, such policies only affect the people not interested in politics. It couldn't lead to the legitimacy of the state. For the two reasons stated above, I strongly believe the Japanese government shouldn't oblige everyone to vote.