英検準一級の英作文です。 添削をお願いします。 •スペルミス、文法の間違い •全体的なアドバイス •点数は何割ほどもらえるか の3点をお聞きしたいです。 「Will machines someday replace humans in the workplace？」 I think that machines will someday replace humans in the workplace. I have two reasons why I think so. The first reason is that using machines instead of humans can cut costs. If companies use machines instead of humans , the number of worker’s burdens are decreasing.As a result, the number of workers are increasing. It can lead to cutting costs. The second reason is that using machines lead to development of technology. These days, many owners and workers pay attention to convenient workplaces. If they use machines, it make possible to their convenient workplaces. For these two reasons, I think that machines are important for humans and they will someday replace humans in the workplace. Also, I hope that the number of good workplaces are increasing.
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