英検準一級の添削お願いします(>_<) なるべく大幅に変えずにお願いしたいです… ●Write an essay on the given TOPIC. ●Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. ●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion ●Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Pet owners should be licensed. POINTS ●Discarded pets ●Government interference ●Pet ownership skills ●Costs I agree with the opinion that pet owners should be licensed. I have two reasons why I think so. To begin with, if pet owners do not have a license, they may abandon their pets. The pet owners should take responsibility and give affection for their pets. So, I think the license is needed so that pets are not discarded, and their owners can raise them. In addition, pet keepers need to take courses given by vets or other animal specialists. They should take into pet ownership skills such as animal healthcare, pet training, and methods of preventing serious diseases. By doing so, the pet owner can live longer with their pets. For the above reasons, it is a good idea for pet owners to have a license.
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