「夏のオリンピックでは様々なスポーツが行われますが、オリンピックの種目として今後新しく加えるとしたら、あなたはどのスポーツを選びますか。理由や具体例を挙げて、自分の意見を書きましょう。」という問いに英 作文をしました。採点お願いします！！ Group dance should become an Olympic sport . There are two reasons. First , group dance give people who are watching it an impression. The performance a numer of dancers do same movement at the same time is powerful and exquiste enough to overwhelme the spectators. Also, group dance is team sport , they create one product by cooperating with a lot of members in several aspect such as create movement , formation , and , thema. The teamwork in that process move audience's heart. Second , recently group dance gets a lot of attention. In Japan , group dance of high school students has been became famous for some years . Dance is easy to undersand how amazing it is .That's why dance will able to populer among a lot of people . Therefore I think group dance should be an Olympic sport in the future.