英作文の添削をして頂きたいです。 テーマは『1人で勉強をする方が良いか、グループで勉強する方が良いか、どのように勉強したいかを記し、理由を述べよ。(約150字ほどで)』です。英作文を全く書き慣れていないので、ご批判は止めて頂けると幸いです。 I prefer to study alone rather than with a group. certainly,i think that studying with a group some merits.For example,if the questions arise while you are studying,you can ask friends them,so you can not only resolve them but also boost your knowledge.However,studying alone has more advantages. First,if you study with a group,to a certain extent,your friends could chat with fellow around them,so it could remove concentration from you,but if you study alone,you can focus on your assignments in your room which keep silent. Second,you can immediately complete your assignments if study alone,so you can produce the time for playing friends and interacting families. For these reasons,studying alone is better for me.