英検準一ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 Topic:Agree or disagree:The Japanese government needs to encourage young people to live in rural areas Points:Education The economy , Lifestyle I disagree with the opinion that the Japanese government needs to encourage young people to live in rural areas. I have two reasons to support my opinion. First of all ,people can not learn enough education in rural areas .Young people would like to learn what they study professional academy the latest .Also, there are few professors in rural areas. It should not deprive young people of an opportunity. Second, living rural areas costs a lot of money. There are small population ,so bus or train fare are higher than in the city. In addition, people usually drive cars. Therefore , it costs gas a lot. According to the reasons stated above, I firmly believe that theJapanese government should not encourage young people live in the country.