英語のプレゼンテーションでおすすめの観光地を紹介します。添削をお願いしたいです。 I'm going to talk about California. California is in America and it's famous for hamburger, Disneyland and Hollywood. I'd like to introduce something that you should go to when you go to California. First, 『California Disneyland』is very fun spot to play. It's totally different from Japan. The size of park is 1.4 times that of Japan, And you can ride or eat something you can't do in Japanese Disneyland. For example, there are turkeyleg, amazing color donuts and scream machines. They are so interesting！ Second,『Knott's Berry Farm』is one of the great sight spot. It's official SNOOPY's theme park and the oldest theme park in the world. There are many attractions so everyone can enjoy the park. And there are also many scream machines so it's happy for people who love screaming. Very very recommend. Third,『Shake Shack』is the most delicious hamburger shop l think. Actually, there is also in Japan , but absolutely home is better. You have to eat it when you go to America. Why don't you go there？ Thank you for listing.