慶應 経済 2023 英作文の添削をお願いいたします。テーマは政府はより多くの子供を持つために家族に金銭的な支援をすべきかどうかです。 In my opinion, I believe that the Japanese government should pay families to have more children. In his 2020 article “Asking the Impossible? Government Campaigns for Larger Families ” , Cole Schauer claims, “How citizens conduct their lives in private should never be a target for state intervention . ” He doesn’t argue that governments should interfere with people’s freedom. However, I strongly disagree with that statement , because governments’ supports can prevent people from giving up having more children due to the cost of creating and nourishing children. It is true that governments should not force people to have more children, but governments should help people seeking support of the cost of creating and nourishing children. In addition, I believe that making a society with support regarding creating and nurturing children is the government’s duty to govern. For theses reasons mentioned above, it would be wise for the Japanese government to pay families to have more children. Therefore,I believe that the Japanese government should pay families to have more children.