英検準一級の添削お願いします(^^)/ ●Write an essay on the given TOPIC. ●Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. ●Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion ●Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers. POINTS ●Aging population ●Costs ●Culture differences ●Globalization I think Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers. I have two reasons to support my opinion. To begin with, hiring foreign workers will make it easy for Japanese companies to expand overseas. If the companies want to get money overseas, they have to hire someone who can speak English. So, companies need foreign workers to succeed in business. In addition, hiring foreign workers will broaden the value of Japanese company's workers. Foreign workers will give a new point of view for the companies. Furthermore, I think that Japanese workers will be positively influenced by the different cultures they experience when they interact with foreign employees. For these reasons, I believe it is a good idea that Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers.