英作文の添削をお願いします。 お題: 動物を動物園で管理するのは良いことですか。 Yes, it is. I’ll explain some reasons. Firstly, the environment on the earth has continued to worse because of global warming. If this problem continues in the future, there will be more endangered animals, so we will surely protect them from the danger. In order to protect them, we should keep animals in zoos, because we can supply them with enough food and water. Secondly, in Japan many students in elementary school go to zoos to study animals. If zoos were disappeared in the future , they will not be able to study them , so zoos are essential for education in Japan. In conclusion, many endangered species need a safe living and education in Japan need animals in zoos ,so we should keep animals in zoos.