英作文の添削をお願いします。 文法のミスや単語の使い方間違いなどを教えて頂きたいです。 10点満点で点数も付けてくれたら嬉しいです。 お題: 日本の歴史的遺産をもっと保護するべきか。 Yes. I’ll explain some reasons. Firstly, a lot of foreign tourists have been visiting Japan for many years, because many of them are interested in historic sites, such as temple.If the historic sites are disappeared, the number foreign tourists will be decreasing and the economic in Japan will be worse. Secondly, education in Japan will be badly influenced. Many students in Japan study Japanese history from elementary school to high school. If historic sites in Japan were disappeared, they would not be interested in it and a number of people would be unknown about their country. In conclusion, if many people were interested in history, they would enjoy in Japan, so we must protect historic sites in Japan.