英検二級ライティングです。問題文は下のです。私の解答の採点をお願いします。 TOPIC People around the world live longer lives than they did in the past. Do you think people will live even longer lives in the future? POINTS Changing lifestyles Developing countries Technology です。 I think that people will live even longer lives in the future. I have two reasons why I think so. To begin with, our technlogy is advancing day by day, so we will be able to live satisfy in the feture. Secend, now, we have changed our lifestyles since in the past. For example, we can enjoy such a game and books even if we don't move violently so we will be able to find our new hobbies anytimes when we are old.That's why I think that people will live ever longer lives in the future.