英検2級のwriting添削お願いしますm(_ _)m question→ Young people love playing computer games, and this may even be their favorite hobby. Do you think it is okay for young people to play computer games? I think it is bad for young people to play computer games.There are two reasons. The first reason is that,it is bad for their health. If you watch the monitor for long time,their eyes become bad. The second reason is that,they must do it for long time.So,they will do not study.It is not good for students. Because of these reasons, I think it is bad for young people to play computer games.
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