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英語の添削お願いします。間違っているところ、aやtheや複数系が不自然なところな...

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2012/4/321:37:43

英語の添削お願いします。間違っているところ、aやtheや複数系が不自然なところなど、自然な英語に直して下さい!東京人と大阪人のある日の会話について

A: What was the most surprising thing in Tokyo ?
B: For me, the most surprising thing was ... Do you know "Hot Pepper" ?
A: No. What's that?
B: It's a free magazine. It's available at the station or convenience store.
A: I've never seen it. What's it about?
B: It tells us where to eat, where to get our hair done, where to everything in Tokyo.And what's the special about it is that it has a lot of coupons in it.
A: I see. So why were you surprised at Hot Pepper ?
B: Because we can get it at almost any stations and convenience stores in Tokyo. Tokyo people seem like they have no interest in Hot Pepper. It comes out at the station or convenience store every month, but it's just left for a long time. Almost no people take it.
A: Is it different from in Osaka ?
B: In Osaka, it's pretty hard to find Hot Pepper. Once it comes out, it immediately disappears from the town.
A: Why is it so popular in Osaka ?
B: I think it's just because Osaka people tend to be strict about money. They often ask for a discount at electronics shop like Bic Camera and Yodobashi Camera. We don't often see things like that in Tokyo.

よろしくお願いします。

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編集あり2012/4/505:44:52

T: What’s just to your surprise in Tokyo ?
O: Well..... it’s about Hot Pepper !!
T: What's that?
O: A for-free monthly magagine delivered at stations and convenience stores.
T: I don’t know it.
What's it about?
O: Local info. on a daily life ― where just to eat, have hair done and play....
And what’s special is, it has kinds of coupons on it.
T: I see.
So why are you that surprised ?
O: Tokyoites seem to be little interested in it.
Each month, most of the copies are left unread.
T: Is it different in Osaka ?
O: There in Osaka, it's just a little hard to get the magagine. .
Once it comes out, it immediately disappears.
T: Why is it so popular ?
O: Just the coupons.
Benefit- keen,Osakans rush for Hot Pepper.
T: Maybe,Tokyoites won’t do such s thing(laugh).


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